1.The pupils and their teachers are having their assembly an the school hall. 2.The headmaster is giving the speech to the pupils and teachers. 3.The teachers are sitting on the stage while the pupils are standing down the stage. 4.The pupils are listening carefully to the headmaster's speech. 5.The teachers are overseeing pupils that is playing.
SECTION B: I would choose netball because the players are girls only.Pupils in year 3 till year 6 that can play netball.I am study in year 6. So,I can play the game.Cik Intan Syafirah would be the coach.Netball is my favourite game.I think I can do the best.The practise will starts on every Mondays at4:00 till 5:30 p.m.I will have teamwork, strong stamina and new skills.Based on the reasons above, I really hope that I can play netball and do the best.
SECTION C: Amin, who is a mischievous boy, like to do troublesome plans. Ono day when he was walking home, he saw a mangoe tree that have many mangoes. He went to the mangoe tree and he looked at the mangoes. Its looked very delicious. He decided to take the mangoes. When he climbed up the mangoe tree,he do not know that he step on the broken branch. The branch broke and Amin felt that his leg was hurt. At the same time, Amin's neighbour that loves to help people that wasin need, help Amin. He tookAmin to the nearest hospital. After he took Amin to the hospital, he call Amin's parents. Amin's parents were shocked that their son needs to be hospitalized immediately. At last, Amin promised that he does not want to be a mischievous boy but he wants to be a kind and good boy.
Dear Aliya, Congratulations! Because you are the first person to submit the work.
My comments: No. 1 ....at the school hall.
No. 2 ....a speech to the pupils and teachers.
No. 3 The teachers are on the stage while the pupils are standing in rows in front of the teachers (the word 'standing down' means to leave a job or position)
No. 4 - GOOD SENTENCE!
No. 5 The prefects and teachers are overseeing the pupils in the hall.
Section B: I would choose netball because it is suitable for girls only. The game is suitable for year three till year six students. Since I am in Year Six, I can join the game. Cik Intan Syafirah would be the coach. She is a very experienced coach. Netball is my favourite game. It is a challenging game. I think I can do best in this game. The practice will be held every Monday at 4.00 to 5.30 p.m. I can work in team and I have strong stamina and new skills. Based in the above reasons, I really hope that I can play netball and do the best for school.
Alya: Please copy the right one in your EW. Thanks, dear.See you tomorrow.
SECTION A: 1. The pupils and the teachers are having the school assembly in the school hall. 2. The teachers are sitting on the chairs,in front of the pupils. 3. The headmaster who is wearing a smart uniform, is giving a speech to the pupils. 4. The pupils are listening attentively to the speech. 5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils during the school assembly. FROM:ADRIANA BT YUSOFF (6EFEKTIF)
SECTION A : 1. The pupils and the teachers are having a school assembly in the school hall. 2. The teachers are sitting on the chairs,in front of the pupils . 3. The headmaster,who is wearing a smart uniform, is giving a speech to the pupils . 4. The pupils are listening attentively to the speech. 5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils during the school assembly.
SECTION A : 1. The pupils and the teachers are having a school assembly in the school hall. 2. The teachers are sitting on the chairs,in front of the pupils . 3. The headmaster,who is wearing a smart uniform, is giving a speech to the pupils . 4. The pupils are listening attentively to the speech. 5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils during the school assembly.
SECTION A: 1.There are many pupils in the school hall. 2.The pupils and their teachers are having their assembly at the school hall. 3.The pupils are attentively to the headmaster's speech. 4.The teacher's are overseeing pupils in the school hall. 5.The headmaster is giving a speech to the pupils and teachers.
SECTION B: I would choose netball because netball is my favourite game.It is for girls only.The game is for year three till year six only.I am in year six so i can join the game.Cik Intan Syafirah would be the coach.It is a challenging game.I think i can do the best in the game.The practice is every Monday at 4.00 to 5.30 p.m.I can work in team and i have strong stamina.Based on the reasons above,i really i hope that i can play netball and i can do the best.
Section A: 1.All teacher and student are having a assembly in the school hall. 2.The teachers are sitting down on the chair at the stage but the students are standing in the hall. 3.The students are queing up in their classes but the prefects is overseeing the students in each classes. 4.The headmaster is giving a speech to the teachers and students. 5.All pupil keep quiet and listen to the headmaster's speech.
1)All the students and teachers are at their school hall 2)The headmaster is giving speech to the students 3)the teachers are sitting on the chair while the students are sitting on the floor 4)The students are listening to their headmasters speech 5)The school hall is very clean
I would choose Netball because i like to play netball during my free time.The coach is Cik Intan Shafirah.She is a good and kind women.The training time is 4.00pm till 5.30pm.I will be free that time so i can go there.We will have teamwork, stamina and also skills
I would choose Netball because it is my favourite game . Besides , the game is only fr girls . So i can play with the game with my girlfriends . The game is suitable for year 3 to 6 . Since I am in year 6 , so i can join this game. The coach is Cik Intan Syafirah who is a very experienced coach in this game . The practice will be held every Monday , at 4.00 to 5.30 p.m . Luckily , i am free on that time . If i choose this game , I can work in team , have a strong stamina and new skills . Based on the above reasons , I believe tht i have made the best choice for myself and i will do my best for school .
SECTION B: I would choose Netball because it is my favourite sport.It is suitable for girls in year 3 to year 6 .Since,I in year 6 so it suits me very well. It also can improve pysical and mental endurance.Thus,it is good and benefial.The training time is at 4-5:30 pm on Monday. I am free at that time .The coach is Cik Intan Syafirah who is a good coach .Based on the above reasons, I believe I have made the perfect choice for myself. FROM:ADRIANA BINTI YUSOFF(6 EFEKTIF)
Johan who is my bossom friend is a mischievous boy . He always troublesome problem. One sunny day,while he was walking from school, he passed by Encik Amin's house .He saw a mango tree in his neighbour's garden . There were many ripe mangoeson the tree.The mangoes looked delicious .Without wasting any time, Johan decided to pluck the mango .He ran towards the tree and climbed up the tree to pluck the mango. While he was climbing up the tree, he accidentally stepped on the broken branch.He fell off the ground .He hurt his leg and cried in pain.Luckily, his neighbour saw him. His neighbour quickly took him to the hospital. Johan regretted for being naughty boy . He promised not to do it again .He thanked his neighbour for his help. FROM:ADRIANA BINTI YUSOFF(6 EFEKTIF)
Ahmad who is my classmate is a mischievous boy.He likes to trouble people especialy his neighbours.
Last week after school time,he went home walking.on the way home,he saw a mango tree in Encik Ramlee's house compound.the mangoes looks ripe and juicy.He decided to steal it.
He climbed Encik Ramlee's house fence and he climbed the tree.He took a few mangoes and ate it on the tree.it was scrumptious.While he was eating the mangoes,he slipped and fell down from the tree.He hurt his leg and was unconscious.
A moment later,Encik Ramlee saw him lying on the ground.he promptly take him to the hospital.The doctor said that he had broke his leg and need a year to recover.He said sorry to Encik Ramlee and regret his mischievous act.
Ali, who is a mischievous boy, like to do troublesome plans. Ono day when he was walking home, he saw a mangoe tree that have many mangoes. He went to the mangoe tree and he looked at the mangoes. Its looked very delicious. He decided to take the mangoes. When he climbed up the mangoe tree,he do not know that he step on the broken branch. The branch broke and Ali felt that his leg was hurt. At the same time, Ali's neighbour that loves to help people that ws in need, help Ali. He took Ali to the nearest hospital. After he took Ali to the hospital, he call Ali's parents. Ali's parents were shocked that their son needs to be hospitalized immediately. At last, Ali promised that he does not want to be a mischievous boy but he wants to be a kind and good boy.
1.The pupils and teachers are having an assembly in the school hall. 2.The pupils are arrangging according to their classes. 3.The headmaster who is standing on the stage is giving a speech to the pupils. 4.The pupils listening attentively to the speech which delivered by the headmaster. 5.The prefect are overseeing the pupils in the hall. (MUHAMMAD ANNUAR ALHADI 6 EFEKTIF)
Ali who is my neighbour is a mischieveous boy.He always comes up with troublesome problems. Last week, Ali was walking home alone because his father cannot took him from school because his father was in KL for his business. when he was walking home,he saw a huge mangoes tree which bore a lot of mangoes.Without much thinking, he ran towards the tree and climbed up. The mangoes looked ripe and juicy. He decideed to take the mangoes andeat the mangoes in the evening.When he was climbing, he accindentaly stepped on the broken branch. he fell of the grond. He could not get up or walk. He was lucky because Pak Mat was there. Looking at his condition Pak Mat decided to went to Ali`s housewhich one stone thrown away from the scene. Wthout wasting anytime, Ali`mother headed to the scene. She was shocked to see Ali lying on the ground motionless. They took Ali to the nearest hospital for the treatment. The doctor said he had spained his ankle and the foot had to bandaged.He also had to use crutches to help him to walk. As for him, He had learnt his lesson and regretted for him unintelligent deed. He knew that no use crying over the milk but he still promised to his parents that he would not climbed tree again and foreever.
I would choose netball because it is made for girls.These game only year 3-6 can play so i am 5 years old so it is suitable for me. This game is on Mondays, at 4.00pm-5.30pm. It is my free time after school so i can go there. The coach of this game is Cik Intan syafirah. She is a good netball coach so she will make our team win if we participate in any competition. This game also promote teamwork, stamina and skills to use. So i think i have made a good choice
1. The headmaster is giving his speech at the school hall. 2. The pupils are listenig the headmaster giving the speech. 3. The pupils are lining up accordin to their class. 4. The teachers are sitting on the chairs on the stage. 5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils in the hall.
1.The pupils and their teachers are having their assembly an the school hall.
ReplyDelete2.The headmaster is giving the speech to the pupils and teachers.
3.The teachers are sitting on the stage while the pupils are standing down the stage.
4.The pupils are listening carefully to the headmaster's speech.
5.The teachers are overseeing pupils that is playing.
SECTION B:
ReplyDeleteI would choose netball because the players are girls only.Pupils in year 3 till year 6 that can play netball.I am study in year 6. So,I can play the game.Cik Intan Syafirah would be the coach.Netball is my favourite game.I think I can do the best.The practise will starts on every Mondays at4:00 till 5:30 p.m.I will have teamwork, strong stamina and new skills.Based on the reasons above, I really hope that I can play netball and do the best.
SECTION C:
ReplyDeleteAmin, who is a mischievous boy, like to do troublesome plans.
Ono day when he was walking home, he saw a mangoe tree that have many mangoes. He went to the mangoe tree and he looked at the mangoes. Its looked very delicious. He decided to take the mangoes.
When he climbed up the mangoe tree,he do not know that he step on the broken branch. The branch broke and Amin felt that his leg was hurt.
At the same time, Amin's neighbour that loves to help people that wasin need, help Amin. He tookAmin to the nearest hospital.
After he took Amin to the hospital, he call Amin's parents. Amin's parents were shocked that their son needs to be hospitalized immediately.
At last, Amin promised that he does not want to be a mischievous boy but he wants to be a kind and good boy.
Dear Aliya,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! Because you are the first person to submit the work.
My comments:
No. 1
....at the school hall.
No. 2
....a speech to the pupils and teachers.
No. 3
The teachers are on the stage while the pupils are standing in rows in front of the teachers
(the word 'standing down' means to leave a job or position)
No. 4 - GOOD SENTENCE!
No. 5
The prefects and teachers are overseeing the pupils in the hall.
Section B:
I would choose netball because it is suitable for girls only. The game is suitable for year three till year six students. Since I am in Year Six, I can join the game. Cik Intan Syafirah would be the coach. She is a very experienced coach. Netball is my favourite game. It is a challenging game. I think I can do best in this game. The practice will be held every Monday at 4.00 to 5.30 p.m. I can work in team and I have strong stamina and new skills.
Based in the above reasons, I really hope that I can play netball and do the best for school.
Alya:
Please copy the right one in your EW. Thanks, dear.See you tomorrow.
SECTION A:
ReplyDelete1. The pupils and the teachers are having the school assembly in the school hall.
2. The teachers are sitting on the chairs,in front of the pupils.
3. The headmaster who is wearing a smart uniform, is giving a speech to the pupils.
4. The pupils are listening attentively to the speech.
5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils during the school assembly.
FROM:ADRIANA BT YUSOFF (6EFEKTIF)
SECTION A :
ReplyDelete1. The pupils and the teachers are having a school assembly in the school hall.
2. The teachers are sitting on the chairs,in front of the pupils .
3. The headmaster,who is wearing a smart uniform, is giving a speech to the pupils .
4. The pupils are listening attentively to the speech.
5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils during the school assembly.
SECTION A :
ReplyDelete1. The pupils and the teachers are having a school assembly in the school hall.
2. The teachers are sitting on the chairs,in front of the pupils .
3. The headmaster,who is wearing a smart uniform, is giving a speech to the pupils .
4. The pupils are listening attentively to the speech.
5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils during the school assembly.
1.The students are at the assembly hall.
ReplyDelete2.The headmaster is giving the students a speech.
3.The students are listening to the speech that their headmaster is giving.
4.The prefects are standing infront of the students.
5.The teachers are sitting on the stage.
SECTION A:
ReplyDelete1.There are many pupils in the school hall.
2.The pupils and their teachers are having their assembly at the school hall.
3.The pupils are attentively to the headmaster's speech.
4.The teacher's are overseeing pupils in the school hall.
5.The headmaster is giving a speech to the pupils and teachers.
SECTION B:
ReplyDeleteI would choose netball because netball is my favourite game.It is for girls only.The game is for year three till year six only.I am in year six so i can join the game.Cik Intan Syafirah would be the coach.It is a challenging game.I think i can do the best in the game.The practice is every Monday at 4.00 to 5.30 p.m.I can work in team and i have strong stamina.Based on the reasons above,i really i hope that i can play netball and i can do the best.
Section A:
ReplyDelete1.All teacher and student are having a assembly in the school hall.
2.The teachers are sitting down on the chair at the stage but the students are standing in the hall.
3.The students are queing up in their classes but the prefects is overseeing the students in each classes.
4.The headmaster is giving a speech to the teachers and students.
5.All pupil keep quiet and listen to the headmaster's speech.
1)All the students and teachers are at their school hall
ReplyDelete2)The headmaster is giving speech to the students
3)the teachers are sitting on the chair while the students are sitting on the floor
4)The students are listening to their headmasters speech
5)The school hall is very clean
I would choose Netball because i like to play netball during my free time.The coach is Cik Intan Shafirah.She is a good and kind women.The training time is 4.00pm till 5.30pm.I will be free that time so i can go there.We will have teamwork, stamina and also skills
ReplyDeleteSection A ;
ReplyDelete1. The students and their teachers are having an
assembly at their school hall .
2. The headmaster who is standing on the stage
is giving a short speech to the students .
3. The students are standing and queing up in a
straight line down stage while the teachers
are sitting on chairs on tht stage .
4. The students are listening attentively to the
headmaster's speech .
5. The prefects are overseeing the students
during the assembly in the school hall .
From ; Wan Nur Amni Fatinee Wan Shohairra ( 6K )
Section B :
ReplyDeleteI would choose Netball because it is my favourite game . Besides , the game is only fr girls . So i can play with the game with my girlfriends . The game is suitable for year 3 to 6 . Since I am in year 6 , so i can join this game. The coach is Cik Intan Syafirah who is a very experienced coach in this game . The practice will be held every Monday , at 4.00 to 5.30 p.m . Luckily , i am free on that time . If i choose this game , I can work in team , have a strong stamina and new skills . Based on the above reasons , I believe tht i have made the best choice for myself and i will do my best for school .
From ; wan nur amni fatinee wan shohairra ( 6K )
SECTION B:
ReplyDeleteI would choose Netball because it is my favourite sport.It is suitable for girls in year 3 to year 6 .Since,I in year 6 so it suits me very well. It also can improve pysical and mental endurance.Thus,it is good and benefial.The training time is at 4-5:30 pm on Monday. I am free at that time .The coach is Cik Intan Syafirah who is a good coach .Based on the above reasons, I believe I have made the perfect choice for myself.
FROM:ADRIANA BINTI YUSOFF(6 EFEKTIF)
SECTION C:
ReplyDeleteJohan who is my bossom friend is a mischievous boy . He always troublesome problem.
One sunny day,while he was walking from school, he passed by Encik Amin's house .He saw a mango tree in his neighbour's garden . There were many ripe mangoeson the tree.The mangoes looked delicious .Without wasting any time, Johan decided to pluck the mango .He ran towards the tree and climbed up the tree to pluck the mango.
While he was climbing up the tree, he accidentally stepped on the broken branch.He fell off the ground .He hurt his leg and cried in pain.Luckily, his neighbour saw him. His neighbour quickly took him to the hospital.
Johan regretted for being naughty boy . He promised not to do it again .He thanked his neighbour for his help.
FROM:ADRIANA BINTI YUSOFF(6 EFEKTIF)
section c
ReplyDeleteAhmad who is my classmate is a mischievous boy.He likes to trouble people especialy his neighbours.
Last week after school time,he went home walking.on the way home,he saw a mango tree in Encik Ramlee's house compound.the mangoes looks ripe and juicy.He decided to steal it.
He climbed Encik Ramlee's house fence and he climbed the tree.He took a few mangoes and ate it on the tree.it was scrumptious.While he was eating the mangoes,he slipped and fell down from the tree.He hurt his leg and was unconscious.
A moment later,Encik Ramlee saw him lying on the ground.he promptly take him to the hospital.The doctor said that he had broke his leg and need a year to recover.He said sorry to Encik Ramlee and regret his mischievous act.
Ali, who is a mischievous boy, like to do troublesome plans.
ReplyDeleteOno day when he was walking home, he saw a mangoe tree that have many mangoes. He went to the mangoe tree and he looked at the mangoes. Its looked very delicious. He decided to take the mangoes.
When he climbed up the mangoe tree,he do not know that he step on the broken branch. The branch broke and Ali felt that his leg was hurt.
At the same time, Ali's neighbour that loves to help people that ws in need, help Ali. He took Ali to the nearest hospital.
After he took Ali to the hospital, he call Ali's parents. Ali's parents were shocked that their son needs to be hospitalized immediately.
At last, Ali promised that he does not want to be a mischievous boy but he wants to be a kind and good boy.
1.The pupils and teachers are having an assembly in the school hall.
ReplyDelete2.The pupils are arrangging according to their classes.
3.The headmaster who is standing on the stage is giving a speech to the pupils.
4.The pupils listening attentively to the speech which delivered by the headmaster.
5.The prefect are overseeing the pupils in the hall.
(MUHAMMAD ANNUAR ALHADI 6 EFEKTIF)
Ali who is my neighbour is a mischieveous boy.He always comes up with troublesome problems.
ReplyDeleteLast week, Ali was walking home alone because his father cannot took him from school because his father was in KL for his business. when he was walking home,he saw a huge mangoes tree which bore a lot of mangoes.Without much thinking, he ran towards the tree and climbed up. The mangoes looked ripe and juicy. He decideed to take the mangoes andeat the mangoes in the evening.When he was climbing, he accindentaly stepped on the broken branch. he fell of the grond. He could not get up or walk. He was lucky because Pak Mat was there. Looking at his condition Pak Mat decided to went to Ali`s housewhich one stone thrown away from the scene.
Wthout wasting anytime, Ali`mother headed to the scene. She was shocked to see Ali lying on the ground motionless.
They took Ali to the nearest hospital for the treatment. The doctor said he had spained his ankle and the foot had to bandaged.He also had to use crutches to help him to walk.
As for him, He had learnt his lesson and regretted for him unintelligent deed. He knew that no use crying over the milk but he still promised to his parents that he would not climbed tree again and foreever.
I would choose netball because it is made for girls.These game only year 3-6 can play so i am 5 years old so it is suitable for me. This game is on Mondays, at 4.00pm-5.30pm. It is my free time after school so i can go there. The coach of this game is Cik Intan syafirah. She is a good netball coach so she will make our team win if we participate in any competition. This game also promote teamwork, stamina and skills to use. So i think i have made a good choice
ReplyDelete1. The headmaster is giving his speech at the school hall.
ReplyDelete2. The pupils are listenig the headmaster giving the speech.
3. The pupils are lining up accordin to their class.
4. The teachers are sitting on the chairs on the stage.
5. The prefects are overseeing the pupils in the hall.