1.Amir is sitting on the chair while reading a book. 2.He always doing his homework in the evening. 3.Amir is heading to the tuition class nearby home. 4. Amir is having a tuition class to gain more knowledge. 5.Amir is also joined the "KLINIK UPSR" which is hosted by his school, for all student who will taking up the "UPSR". 6.He always reading and practice to achieve 5A's in the "UPSR" examination.
from Tengku Qistina Balqis binti Tg. Mohd Arifin 6 Kreatif.
Ali is a hardworking boy.His hobby is reading storybooks and studying. Last year,Ali was my classmate.he knew that UPSR is around the corner.He studied everyday till he burn the midnight oil.He went for tution classes,and he never miss any of the tution. He also went to a class that name Klinik UPSR.He focus on UPSR everyday.At last he passed his exam with flying with colours.He was very happy.
Dear Tengku Qistina Balqis, Here's my comments: 1. if you want to use the 'while', you need to have two doers for example: Amir is sitting on the chair while Amirah is watching television. (Proper sentence) 2. He always does his homework in the evening. (if this question is done under section A, you cannot make any general statement. You should describe the action that is happening at the moment.) 3. it goes the same with sentence no 3, 4, 5 & 6. This exercise should be done under Section C. Please copy this comment into your logbook and see me tomorrow in school. Bye. Thank you.
1.Syahir and his friends are having a Teacher's Day celebration. 2.Syahir, who is wearing a school uniform, is giving a Teacher's Day present for his teacher. 3.There are many present on the table. 4.There are many types of food on the table. 5.The teacher receive many present from her student.
Abu is a hardworking and ambitious boy.He always read the newspaper or magazine that bought by his father. He determined to get 5A because he does not want to dissapoint his parents.He always go to tuition class to make sure that he does not missing any subject.He requests some money to join the UPSR clinic because he think that he can get different type of knowledge and he can use it for UPSR. He does revision the subject that he learns at his school in every night. When UPSR,he little nervous.But,he confident by all his effort,he can get 5A.He doas the best. When the results come out,he suprised that he get 5A.His parents proud with their son achievment.
1.Azwan,who is sitting on the chair is reading a book. 2.He always do the homework every afternoon. 3.He always go to tuition class near by school 4.Azwan is having some tuition class to more knowledge. 5.Azwan also joined "Klinik UPSR" for all student who will taking UPSR. 6.He always reading and do some exercise to achieve 5A's is examination
from:puteri syaidatul ellya bt mohd zaki class 6 bestari
1.Amir is sitting on the chair while reading a book in his room. 2.He always do the homework every evening. 3.He always go for tuitionclass near his house. 4.Amir also joined "Klinik UPSR" for all year 6 students who are sittling for exam. 5.Amir always reads and don some revision to acheive 5A's in the examination.
Last year,my brother hairi,got straight A's for UPSR.He always burn the midnight oil until he successfully achieved UPSR results with flying colours.
Everyday,he studied smartly and he always followed his schedule.He oftens finished his homework.
He also goes for extra class in the evening to gain additional knowledge.Besides,he give full attention to his teacher while taking notes on the subjects which he cannot posses.
He usually went to the UPSR clinic to obtain strategy about how to answer the UPSR question correctly.
He does his revision and he also reads the magazine about tactics used by ex UPSR straight A's candidates to achieve their goal.
Finally with gods will,he finally got 5A's in UPSR test.His hard work paid off.He was on cloud nine as he jumped joyfully.
1.Amir is sitting on the chair while reading a book.
ReplyDelete2.He always doing his homework in the evening.
3.Amir is heading to the tuition class nearby home.
4. Amir is having a tuition class to gain more knowledge.
5.Amir is also joined the "KLINIK UPSR" which is hosted by his school, for all student who will taking up the "UPSR".
6.He always reading and practice to achieve 5A's in the "UPSR" examination.
from Tengku Qistina Balqis binti Tg. Mohd Arifin
6 Kreatif.
Ali is a hardworking boy.His hobby is reading storybooks and studying.
ReplyDeleteLast year,Ali was my classmate.he knew that UPSR is around the corner.He studied everyday till he burn the midnight oil.He went for tution classes,and he never miss any of the tution.
He also went to a class that name Klinik UPSR.He focus on UPSR everyday.At last he passed his exam with flying with colours.He was very happy.
Dear Tengku Qistina Balqis,
ReplyDeleteHere's my comments:
1. if you want to use the 'while', you need to have two doers for example:
Amir is sitting on the chair while Amirah is watching television. (Proper sentence)
2. He always does his homework in the evening. (if this question is done under section A, you cannot make any general statement. You should describe the action that is happening at the moment.)
3. it goes the same with sentence no 3, 4, 5 & 6.
This exercise should be done under Section C.
Please copy this comment into your logbook and see me tomorrow in school.
Bye.
Thank you.
1.Syahir and his friends are having a Teacher's Day celebration.
ReplyDelete2.Syahir, who is wearing a school uniform, is giving a Teacher's Day present for his teacher.
3.There are many present on the table.
4.There are many types of food on the table.
5.The teacher receive many present from her student.
Abu is a hardworking and ambitious boy.He always read the newspaper or magazine that bought by his father.
ReplyDeleteHe determined to get 5A because he does not want to dissapoint his parents.He always go to tuition class to make sure that he does not missing any subject.He requests some money to join the UPSR clinic because he think that he can get different type of knowledge and he can use it for UPSR.
He does revision the subject that he learns at his school in every night.
When UPSR,he little nervous.But,he confident by all his effort,he can get 5A.He doas the best.
When the results come out,he suprised that he get 5A.His parents proud with their son achievment.
1.Azwan,who is sitting on the chair is reading a book.
ReplyDelete2.He always do the homework every afternoon.
3.He always go to tuition class near by school
4.Azwan is having some tuition class to more knowledge.
5.Azwan also joined "Klinik UPSR" for all student who will taking UPSR.
6.He always reading and do some exercise to achieve 5A's is examination
from:puteri syaidatul ellya bt mohd zaki
class 6 bestari
1.Amir is sitting on the chair while reading a book in his room.
ReplyDelete2.He always do the homework every evening.
3.He always go for tuitionclass near his house.
4.Amir also joined "Klinik UPSR" for all year 6 students who are sittling for exam.
5.Amir always reads and don some revision to acheive 5A's in the examination.
Last year,my brother hairi,got straight A's for UPSR.He always burn the midnight oil until he successfully achieved UPSR results with flying colours.
ReplyDeleteEveryday,he studied smartly and he always followed his schedule.He oftens finished his homework.
He also goes for extra class in the evening to gain additional knowledge.Besides,he give full attention to his teacher while taking notes on the subjects which he cannot posses.
He usually went to the UPSR clinic to obtain strategy about how to answer the UPSR question correctly.
He does his revision and he also reads the magazine about tactics used by ex UPSR straight A's candidates to achieve their goal.
Finally with gods will,he finally got 5A's in UPSR test.His hard work paid off.He was on cloud nine as he jumped joyfully.